Love, Sex and Happy Endings
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The storyteller knows each character in his or her story has goals and motivations that make their individual character arcs ripe for conflict.
Have you ever gossiped about a relative, a friend or a co-worker? It would be surprising if you hadnât. Gossip is
actually a handy tool, a survival skill that humans have nurtured for tens of thousands of years.
When you try to make sense of why people do what they doâincluding yourself!âand examine the conflicts that
arise from those actions, you learn how to act and respond in a complicated social world. And it's the conflicts
characters face that make a story a story. There is no story without conflict.
This post is part of Bardsy's free â Romance Toolkit, which includes plenty of resources and videos. Click here to see all the pieces:
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In romance writing, conflict fuels the narrative. These conflicts may be external or internal to the characters.
Internal conflict is what a character feels when personal goals run up against moral or psychological roadblocks.

The thinking and emotional growth of characters are driven by internal conflict, and manifested in character
arc.
For example, does the heroine have a lot of baggage from previous relationships? Does the hero have a problem with
commitment? Or vice versa!
External conflicts are what characters encounter in the world when outward goals are thwarted by a particular
individual, event or social barrier, say, the French Revolution, or a tidal wave.


The conflicts that drive the storyâs events are external conflicts, and they drive the narrative arc.
Most good stories have both Internal and external conflicts, but regardless, conflict is essential. We've included our conflict handout to help you
develop the
conflicts for
your story. Just remember, the heroine and
hero must overcome something so theyâand youâcan enjoy the prize of the story: love, sex and a happy ending!
Editor Marla Daniels says this:
One of my biggest notes is always conflict, conflict, conflict! Oftentimes, because authorsâand readers alikeâlove
when the hero and
heroine are happy and in love, there isn't enough conflict throughout the relationship. Tension and conflict make
the happy-ever-after a bigger payoff, so don't be afraid to let your couples get into it throughout the novel so
that when they come back together at the end, the reconciliation packs an even bigger emotional punch.
Editor Meaghan Wagner adds:
For me, tension in romance has to really be authentic, and for that to work the
obstacle has to be pitch perfect. It has to be real and the consequences of tackling that obstacleâwhether it be
family or circumstance or anything elseâhas to be real, and a dire enough deterrent to keep our leads apart; yet
they do have to be able to overcome it, their lives intact enough to warrant the âhappyâ in âhappy ending.â
Before that happy ending, however, the author must deliver the other key components of romance: love and sex. Many writers are
stymied by sex in romance writing. So, how do you approach writing scenes of passion? Nora Roberts
has the right idea. When asked how she handles sex in her novels, she explains:
Exactly the same way I approach writing any other scene. Action, reaction, motivation, emotion, all have to come
from the characters. Writing a love scene requires the same elements from the writer as any other.
Regarding that all-important âhappy ending,â Roberts says thatâabove allâshe writes what she likes to read, and wonders why some
readers have an issue with happy endings.

Romance gets disparaged for the happy endings. But all genres have expectations and all genres
require narrative resolution.
â Nora Roberts
Roberts further notes:
[I]t's disparaged because it's happy. And if it was important, it would be tragic. Which is
bullshit! Look at Much Ado About Nothingâeverybody is happy! And it's a brilliant romantic comedy. It's one of my
favourites. And that's not crap. A Midsummer Night's Dream isn't crap. There's nothing wrong with being happy.
Amen to that!
This is the fourth and final installment of our Romance Kit. We hope you've enjoyed our close encounter with matters of the heart.
Share the love by submitting your romance story to our current contest before February 10. There are some lovely prizes up for
grabs, including $399 and publication in our Romance Anthology.
Click here for all the details and to enter.
For more great specifics on creating your conflict and ending, click on our Romance Toolkit, which includes a nifty handout and video. Click here: Romance Toolkit
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