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DESCRIPTION
Identifiable and plausible actors, human or not
Authentic characters who come to imagined life
BACKSTORY
Main characters with pasts that inform their identities
Relevant histories that spur individual change and action
AGENCY
Characters who manifest through thoughts and choices
Clear, cumulative character development
PHYSICALITY
Descriptive details that create a complete setting
A world that readers can imagine being within
CULTURE
A defined society
A social environment with key features fully realized
CONTINUITY
No unintended anomalies
Intentional inconsistencies that enrich the setting
GOAL-STAKE
Discernible motivations for all actions
Friction that steadily intensifies stakes
OPPOSITION
Obstacles that impede goals
Situations that make discord inevitable
CLARITY
Some recognizable message
An organic, overarching message
RELEVANCE
A relatable message
A profound impact
INCITING
A specific incident that tees up events
An initial event that sets expectations and creates momentum
RISING
A logical sequence of events tied to an advancing narrative
Compounding events that compel engagement
CLIMAX
An obvious emotional peak
A culmination of tension realized in a defining moment
FALLING
No unintended loose ends
A managed moment that allows readers to recover
RESOLUTION
A clear ending, whether open or closed
A satisfying and impactful conclusion
EXPRESSION
Apt word choice and syntax
Stimulating vocabulary and phrasing
VOICE
A consistent style
A distinctive, evocative style
MECHANICS
No mistakes in grammar, punctuation, etc.
Purposeful and impactful construction throughout
ENVIRONMENT
Characters who fit world and vice versa
A synergistic interaction between characters and world
VERACITY
A solid connection between conflict and theme
Conflict and theme locked into a mutually reinforcing spiral
INTEGRATION
No incompatibility between elements
A productive orchestration of all elements
DYNAMICS
No unintended discontinuities between events
Unfolding events that exert a magnetic push or pull
RESONANCE
Events that correspond with conflict and theme
Sufficient impetus from events to deliver a powerful message
SUMMARY / NOTES
Self Evaluation (Updated Jul 23, 2026) 1945
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