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Sketch Your Next Novel Our Way; Get Started in One Day
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Good Spiraling: Conscientiously Add Ideation and Feedback to Write Better Novels
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Once Upon a Time? What Fairy Tales Teach Novelists About Memory and Writing
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Part 3: Mastering the 100,000-Word Novel Budget: Multivalue Paragraphs
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Part 2: Mastering the 100,000-Word Novel Budget: Satisfying Chapters
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Part 1: How to Master the 100,000-Word Novel Budget and Make Every Word Count
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Isolation's Impact: Evidence that Authors Misjudge Their Work
Jun 16:
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Unlocking Story Sense: The Differentiator Between Good and Great Authors
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Creation vs. Generation: Drawing a Non-technical Red Line Between Human Authorship and AI
May 19:
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Author Bio: From Bore to Brand with an Irresistible Tidbit in 6 Steps
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Five Steps to a better Novel Cover: The A.T.E. Roadmap
Apr 21:
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Writers as Solepreneurs: Why Finishing your Novel Opens the Best Door to a Rewarding Business
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How Authors Can Succeed During Economic Downturns
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Have Sales Chase You: Select Writing Projects with Passion and Potential
Mar 25:
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The Art of Orientation: Anchoring Your Reader at Every Chapter Break
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How to Cultivate "Healthy Arrogance": Part 2: The Confidence You Need to Break Through as a Novelist
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How to Cultivate "Healthy Arrogance": Part 1: What Not to Do
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Stop Writing in a Straight Line: The Power of Nonlinear Novel Development
Jan 29:
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The Waiter Problem: Why Authors Need True Product Testing
Jan 15:
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Separability Secrets: Why Subpar Prose Sells & 3 Ways that Helps Your Novels
Dec 10:
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Create Authentic, Investable Characters: A Free Comprehensive Online Developer
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How to Crystallize Your Novelâs Narrative: The 4 Stages of the Minimum Complete Story
Nov 12:
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The 9-Sentence Novel: How to Build a Minimum Complete Story (MCS)
Nov 5:
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Our Minimum Complete Story (MCS): Better Novels in 90 Seconds
Oct 29:
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Example Character: Meet Pat the Firefighter
Oct 22:
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Character Recipe Step 2: Blend Your Equation Ingredients to Relatable Beings
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Character Equation Three: Steal Distinctiveness from Referents You Know
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Turn Readers into Superfans: Build Two-Way Connections
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Character Equation Two: Take Advantage of Readers' Cultural Knowledge
Sep 23:
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Character Equation One: Steal Parts of Yourself For A Publishable Character
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The Publishability Indexâ˘: A Checklist for Your Story
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Four Musts for Compelling First Chapters
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What's Your Writer Persona? Message Morgan
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What's Your Writer Persona? Grandiose Gary
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What's Your Writer Persona? Publication Pat
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What's Your Writer Persona? Motivation Max
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What's Your Writer Persona? Learning Logan
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Bardsy's MCS: A Small Story That Makes a Big Difference
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How to Hook Your Readers (and Keep Them) via Commonality
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Stories, Sweat, and Tears: 6 Tips for Writers Dealing with Rejection
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Effectively Using Beta Readers in 2025
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Have Something to Show for Your Summer
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A Guide to Bardsy's Directed Writing Groups
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What Can a Writing Coach Do for You?
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Thanks, but No Thanks: When Your Writing Gets Rejected
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Winning Revisions: Making Writing Feedback Work for You
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Collecting Writing Feedback You Can Actually Use
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Is My First Chapter a Winner?
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Social Media for Authors: A Marketing Mindset
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But I Don't Want to be an Influencer . . . Social Media for Authors
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What's Your Writer Persona? Hobbyist Hayden + Career Cary
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Planning Your Success: We're Here to Help!
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Fear Not ChatGPT: Only Humans Can Judge Writing Contests (And Stories)
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Bardsy's 2024 Anthology Contest
Apr 10:
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How to Prototype Your Novel and Ensure Coherence via Short Stories
Mar 19:
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The Art of Memoir: Exploring the Intersection of Truth and Storytelling
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Decisions, Decisions: Choosing a Writing Conference & Maximizing Your Time
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Writing Conferences: A Writerâs Paradise or a Wasted Weekend?
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Become a Published Author: What Goes Into Self-Publishing on Amazon
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Your Guide to Enteringâand WinningâWriting Contests
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How Great Writing Workshops Work
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The Best Feedback You Will Ever Receive
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Writing Personas: Ready Riley!
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7 Tips for Writing an Author Bio That Gets You Noticed
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Yes, You Need an Author WebsiteâEven If Youâre Unpublished
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Small Steps to Big Success with Bardsy Anthologies
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Youâll Love Writing with Will.Power
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Submit Early for Success
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Determine the Next Step in Your Writing
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Break Through Your Blocks with Will.Power
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Avoid Instant Disqualification
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Give and Ye Shall Receive
Nov 8:
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Turn Your Short Story Into a Novel
Hereâs a not-so-fun fact about writing a novel: the initial excitement you have for your project isnât enough to get you from Once upon a time to a polished final draft. At Bardsy, we recommend starting with a story element you're passionate about, such as your characters or world, and using that momentum to propel you. Nevertheless, at some point, youâll have to dig in when the going gets tough. This holds doubly true when life throws external obstacles your way. These obstacles arenât always negativeâtake summertime for example. Although you may look forward to having more time for family activities while schoolâs out, finding the solitude you need to focus on your novel may be challenging. And when the going gets toughâŚ
Enthusiasm Isnât Enough
Unless youâre an outlier, passion alone wonât keep you writing. Weâve all had moments where dragging the Word file to the trash is dangerously tempting, or a new plot idea seems infinitely more exciting than our current work in progress. Thatâs when having a clearly defined goal, a plan for success, and disciplineâwhat we call intelligent persistenceâcomes into play.
Last week, we covered how Bardsyâs directed writing groups provide you with the outside perspective you need to take your novel to the next level, improve your developmental editing skills, and learn how to leverage your novelâs best assets to find your ideal readers. Our goal is to help you reach success, and part of that process is learning how to stay motivated long enough to reach your writing goals.
Success is almost totally dependent upon drive and persistence.
â Denis Waitley
Finding Success
Over years of helping writers reach their goals, weâve identified something the most successful have in common, and it might surprise you. It isnât spectacular worldbuilding, gorgeous prose, or even a compelling plot, though all those components are important. Weâve found that a key factor to a writerâs success is intelligent persistence. Hereâs a fact: Intelligent persistence is a skill, not a trait, meaning you can essentially teach yourself to persevere. If youâre wondering what intelligent persistence is, keep reading.
To start, intelligent persistence means persisting, but in a strategic way. Itâs being committed to seeing something through while also evaluating ways to reach your end goal to find the most effective one. In other words, you think carefully about how to reach your goal as well as the goal itself, which includes monitoring your progress and making tactical changes when needed. In short, intelligent persistence requires you to determine your goal, discern the most effective method for achieving it, and persevere until you either succeed or realize what youâre doing isnât working, and regroup. For many writers, the second half of that sentence is the key.
Intelligent Persistence in Practice
For demonstration purposes, letâs put intelligent persistence to the test and decide whether to set a summer writing goal or take a hiatus. On the one hand, you could choose to take the summer off and recharge your batteries. No time constraints or other physical barriers prevent this choice. The only potential stumbling block is creativeâmissing the act of working on your manuscript. The outcome of this choice is easily predicted: no progress on your novel.
Now, letâs look at the other choice: setting a summer writing goal, while still keeping potential potholes and ideal tactics in mind. Some common obstacles include schedule changes, vacations, and the general lack of motivation that often accompanies the summer months. None of these are insurmountable, provided you acknowledge and plan for them. Youâll want to set a specific goal and have a strategy that accounts for factors such as childcare or relatives visiting, as well as your preferred writing practices and personality.
Hopefully, you'll choose to prioritize working on your novel. After all, now you know what it takes. Youâll follow the path youâve charted, analyzing your efforts throughout the summer to ensure youâre staying on course, and correcting if you stray or stall. Remember: if you do hit a roadblock, continuing with the same tactics that arenât working isnât the answer. This applies to your summer goal and your long-term writing goals, leading us to the final component of intelligent persistence weâll discuss today:
If you do not have persistence, then no amount of education, talent, or genius can make up for it. - Stephen Richards
A Willingness to Analyze and Adjust
It isnât unusual for writers to come to us because theyâre stuck. Maybe they realize something is wrong with their story but canât pinpoint it, or theyâve been endlessly querying agents or publishers without bites. Perhaps, theyâve self-published but arenât seeing the return on their marketing efforts theyâd hoped for. Sometimes itâs the timeless question that plagues every writer at one point or another, âIs my work good enough to be published?â
In all these cases, writers made the wise choice. They didnât toss out their manuscript or give up their writing aspirations, they evaluated their situation, realized what they were doing wasnât working, and tried something else: Bardsy. :-)
Identifying that your current efforts arenât as effective as they should be is an essential part of intelligent persistence for one simple reason: persistence is worthless when itâs aimed in the wrong direction. Misdirected persistence can even be detrimental, not just from a practical standpoint but an emotional one as well. Toiling diligently without progression is discouraging, making it that much easier to give up. Being willing to analyze your actions, and adjust your effortsâsometimes in a massive wayâis critical to reaching success.
When you attend our mini workshop, Setting (& Reaching!) Your Summer Goals, you'll make a plan to reach your next writing milestone. This way, you can go into the summer feeling prepared for challenges and excited to make progress on your story.
Once you have a plan, thereâs nothing left but to do it. Your reward comes in the form of significant progress toward a completed novel, and a sense of accomplishmentâwhen you could have been relaxing, you set a goal and achieved it.
Ready to make a plan to reach writing success? Attend our mini workshop, Setting (& Reaching!) Your Summer Goals on Wednesday, May 28th at 4:00 PM Pacific or Saturday, May 31st at 10:00 AM Pacific. Drop an email to joinus@bardsy.com to save your spot.